DeviationsEvery two weeks, written deviations will be placed in this journal for you to comment on. This service allows your work to be read and critiqued or commented by other members of the group. Please support this service by leaving a comment/critique (depending on the specification) on the following deviations:

[Unspecified] on
Like the Rain 1

Critique on
Charon atop the river Styx

Comments on
reach hellHow it works
Send in a note with a link to
one of your deviations. Be specific as to what you want from this service. Do you want a comment? Do you want genuine critiques? DO NOT submit your work asking for a

. These requests will be ignored.
Please title your note with "Comment Service."
Your entry will be put on the waiting list.

Three entries a fortnight shall be posted in this journal.

We welcome all members to leave comments.
RulesOnly prose and poetry will be submitted to the journal.
Only submitt one entry. You may submitt another piece of work once yours has been removed from the journal.
You must comment on other members' work put up in the service or your deviation will be removed from the Comment Service.
Devious Comments
--
At his age he could rub up against a tree and get a hard-on.
Also, [link]
--
Featured link: Someone that wrote a story.
--
Life is pain. Living is dealing with it. ~TheDorsai
--
Featured link: Someone that wrote a story.
--
Life is pain. Living is dealing with it. ~TheDorsai
--
Featured link: Someone that wrote a story.
--
Life is pain. Living is dealing with it. ~TheDorsai
--
visit my poetry account:
~cheramyn
Previous Page12345 Next Page